First Kiss Scene

Over at Miss Snark's First Victim she has a very interesting series of posts up. 50 first kiss scenes just dangling out there, waiting for advice...critique...etc...

I'm entry #16 - click here to read - it's from my current WIP, a contemporary YA. I've gotten 6 comments and they aren't too hot, however, I absolutely still love this scene and these characters no matter what. Feel free to leave your 2 cents as well : )

Be prepared the scene is rather steamy - in an innocent YA kind of way. Yeah, I love this scene. To death. It reminds me of what it feels like to finally kiss the guy you've been madly crushing on. At least that's how I remember it. I'm an impossible romantic, I'll admit it.

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